Hello again friends,
Here's an initial idea for a pop song for female vocalist, female group or possibly a female/male duet. As usual I've tried to concentrate on the melody and lyrics. I know my vocals aren't really suitable and the production isn't brilliant, but I ask for your opinions on the idea, does it work as a 'song', is it catchy/memorable and does it have any potential? Does anyone know any performer who would be interested in recording it?
Heres the all important link!-
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12040163&q=hiBest regards,
Alex S
1st Verse (rhyming 1=3, 2=4, 5=7, 8 rhymes with each verse)
You're a mean street fighter, I am a poet,
But this bond can't get much tighter and I think you know it,
My feet won't touch the ground, if you finally save me,
It's rapture that I've found, whenever I know you're near.
1st Chorus
If we have the moon and the stars above,
nothing can stop us from falling in love,
That is why I need to now, feel so close to you,
Wherever we go I'm in paradise,
this heaven I see when I look in you eyes,
Always makes me everyday, feel so close to you.
2nd Verse
We should spend some time together, on a quiet vacation,
Let's not worry 'bout the weather, or the destination,
With you now by my side, know it's all plain sailing,
These feelings I can't hide, what I want's now so clear.
2nd Chorus
If we have the moon and the stars above,
Nothing can stop us from falling in love,
I know why I need to now, feel so close to you,
Down by the shore there's a summer breeze,
we'll sit there alone, hear it rustle the trees,
That is where I have to now, feel so close to you.
Break (rhyming, 1=2, 5=6, 4=8)
Can't you see I need you tonight,
everything is always so right, in my life when I'm with you,
Got a problem, can you relate?
only you can settle my fate, now you know, what you must do.
Guitar Solo
3rd Verse
In our one defining moment, everything's perfection,
You're a classical exponent of showing your affection,
We're standing in the same shoes, and there's not point waiting,
Let's play a game we can't lose, don't let our chance disappear.
Final Chorus
If we have the moon and the stars above,
nothing can stop us from falling in love,
That is why I need to now, feel so close to you.
Wherever we go I'm in paradise,
this heaven I see when I look in you eyes,
Always makes me everyday, feel so close to you.
Down by the shore there's a summer breeze,
let's sit there alone, hear it rustle the trees,
That is where I need to now, feel so close to you.
Copyright Alex S 20 September 2012