[ofgaray]

Short Link (Soundcloud): http://snd.sc/16dGnrx

It's a protestant song about the new world order

TITLE: The New World Sh*t

we are being humiliated
by a handful of stupid handlers
they want to own the world
at the cost of our ignorance and blindness

you have to stand up and fight to live
the new world sh*t must not to keep

let's leave this lethargy
so we can live in peace
we know our time is coming down
let’s make them disappear
this scourge is hurting here
please take away these scoundrels now

You crooks, f*ck off!

First they control your mind
as when you tell a baby what is wrong and right
is on you to decide
if you want to live free or with a chip inside

¿have you been asked if you agree?
you ought to claim your rights on the streets
like animals with the mark of the beast
the new world sh*t must not to keep

*I censored some words to not be banned
I hope you like the song

[terrysains]

Important words, lost to the music, I think somehow like, 'Sex pistols-Anarchy' you should get the lyrics above the guitar and not the other way around? Good luck Terry.

[Jamie]

Loved the energy and the guitar tones.Great riffs.Enjoyed it a lot.

Cheers
Jamie

[Mark Ryan]

This isn't my bag, but I can see it fitting in well into this genre. What I would say is that it sounds as though the lyrics were written before the music, and then the music was written to fit the lyrics (I may be wrong though). There's nothing wrong with this way of writing it's just sometimes the end product can sound forced if that makes sense, and a song can lose some of it's melodic qualities. I would have liked to have seen some more variation with the chord structure, but like I said earlier, this genre isn't my domain so I'm critiquing out of my comfort zone here 
All the best
Mark

[digger72]

Hi,
Sounds great. Alice and Chains with a bit more thrash. Excellent production. Works for me. You may well like ABeautifulVirus' stuff - playing in the same ball park.

Cheers,

Digger

[diademgrove]

Hi,

I thought that was good.

My only suggestion is to change slightly the line which starts "you ought, etc". I think this would make it stronger, "its time to claim our rights on the streets". It changes the singer from being an observer to a participant.

This is a song about the same thing you may not have come across.

diadem

[Dogmax]

Sci-Fi, thats your audiences.   

[ofgaray]

This isn't my bag, but I can see it fitting in well into this genre. What I would say is that it sounds as though the lyrics were written before the music, and then the music was written to fit the lyrics (I may be wrong though). There's nothing wrong with this way of writing it's just sometimes the end product can sound forced if that makes sense, and a song can lose some of it's melodic qualities. I would have liked to have seen some more variation with the chord structure, but like I said earlier, this genre isn't my domain so I'm critiquing out of my comfort zone here 
All the best
Mark

Hi Mark, well... I wrote the lyrics after the music and the important here is the message rather than aesthetics, as in protest rock in general.
Regards.

[ofgaray]

Hi,

I thought that was good.

My only suggestion is to change slightly the line which starts "you ought, etc". I think this would make it stronger, "its time to claim our rights on the streets". It changes the singer from being an observer to a participant.

This is a song about the same thing you may not have come across.

diadem

Thank you, good suggestion ... I liked. I liked song too.

[ofgaray]

Sci-Fi, thats your audiences.   

As said my song... "at the cost of our IGNORANCE and BLINDNESS"... that's your problem, and of many people

[dinnerwithgreedo]

This ROCKED like a f*cking boulder!!
The only thing i would change is to make the vocal louder.

[crystalsuzy]

Hi ofgaray...I love what you're saying in this song and even though heavy metal isn't normally my favourite genre, I think it suites the lyrics and message...I would definitely bring the vocals up in the mix though...I love the way the guitars just suddenly stop...great song

[Dogmax]

Sci-Fi, thats your audiences.  

As said my song... "at the cost of our IGNORANCE and BLINDNESS"... that's your problem, and of many people

The new World order eh, the only way to change that organisation for the better is from within, its call a new form of revolution because it starts from the top and to be honest with you, i think it has already started, but anyway.

Sci-Fi products that's what i thought of when i play your song there's a awful lot of money to be made there, that's your audiences but i do understand your words, to your song that
is.  

Come the Revolution eh  

[Saeed AlSuri]

Hello Oscar ..

Very nice song .. great work .. lyrics .. guitars .. production .. singing .. all in all .. very nice ..

energetic yes very .. 

Cheers ..