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Title: CATCH 22
Post by: Misanthropist on February 16, 2019, 10:27:48 AM

(an explanatory attempt)


The pilot would be insane

to return to his bomber plane

and he'd be pretty shrewd

to say flying's no good

but if he was deemed smart

he had to restart...

but if he flew while missing a screw

he didn't have to

but if he didn't like his flying affair

they'd say he's alright...up there!

Title: Re: CATCH 22
Post by: Dogmax on February 19, 2019, 10:55:20 PM

I like your lines of flow but hey what's next  8)

Title: Re: CATCH 22
Post by: Dogmax on February 26, 2019, 10:44:28 PM

Hey i still admire your posting of lines but you need to put more to this, so what are we talking about here a book  8)

Remember we're just figment writers   8)