[Paulski]

I really like what you've written here. Very uplifting and light-hearted connotations behind all the words. I really liked how you included the intended sound effects, too, that really helped to paint the picture in my head. A very well written song all around, well done

Thanks for the nice words.
Yeah - those sound effects were really meant for notes for when I record.
I usually remove them when I post - but glad they helped paint the scene.
Cheers
Paul

[Gwyneth Rose]

Hi Paul

A lot of emotional impact here. I think most people can relate at one time or another
to this line
And my heart is jumpin' for a "hello" from your end

Enjoyed the read and felt the emotion. Thanks for sharing.

Gwyneth

[Paulski]

Hi Paul

A lot of emotional impact here. I think most people can relate at one time or another
to this line
And my heart is jumpin' for a "hello" from your end

Enjoyed the read and felt the emotion. Thanks for sharing.

Gwyneth

Hi Gwyneth
Appreciate the kind comments!
Best
Paul

[Paulski]

Sorry to bump such an old thread, but I just posted the song I wrote for these lyrics and would REALLY appreciate any feedback on how it turned out.

thank you X 10

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/song-reviews/don't-hang-up!-7079/