Well heres a collaboration between me and my online friend Peter. I wrote this song but felt that it would need a little more "Oumpfh!" sound wise. So I sent Peter my midi tracks and he hooked up his arsenal of analogue goodness, and did what we might call a remix of my still unreleased track. So the song (chords, lyrics and melodies) is written by me and Peter then made some small arrangement changes (more of a normal pop structure) and programmed all the sounds. The bassline sound alone is created by eight(!) different discrete analogue oscillators….
The song is called
The Crown and is about inequalities in life and that we just have to rely on each other instead of fighting… On one occasion I don´t sing what I was supposed to sing. We decided on me laying down new vocal tracks but Peter finished the track anyway.
So what do you guys think about structure, sound and the overall songwriting (including the lyrics)?
The song
https://soundcloud.com/skogge/the-crown The words
The CrownAll that we invested in the sun
were not returned to each and everyone (of us)
Shining on the castles and the mansions
Blistering with gold
All that we invested in the Crown
was waving from a balcony
so high above the ground
Sitting in the castles and the mansions
soon to turn away...
...with a big smile
Thank you for today
We´ll use the value that you made
Thanks for your workday!
Taking all the promises apart
We won´t find a future there for a start
How can we be fortunate by giving
our fortunes away?
Please consider me
for a change
I won´t sell your soul
for a pocket full of change
You are me and I am you
Together
we´ll change the world
If you´re failing
I´ll change your tires
You will mend my view of the world
Look at us now
The world
If you´re failing
I´ll change your tires
You will mend my view of the world
Look at us now