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Mountaintop Blues

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« on: September 07, 2011, 12:45:06 AM »
Here's a progressive blues song of mine, feedback would be nice

I wish I could be
Alone on a mountaintop
Oh I wish I could be
Alone on a mountaintop
The world's too frenzied
Never gives me time to stop

I'd scream at the forest
What is the meaning of the void
Scream at the forest
What is the meaning of the void
If the forest couldn't answer
Perfect silence is employed

All the insects
and the man in the moon
All the insects
and the man in the moon
spin around me like
pins dropping on the sea

I've got to keep my head clear
and the skies will be too
Got to keep my head clear
and the skies will be too
If storm clouds gather
It'll be all the worse for you