Hi All.
After some very useful comments when I posted my last song, I decided to take on board a frequent comment which was that it would sound good with a thumping kick drum and given the 'Avicii treatment'
As I'd only heard the one famous Avicii track at the time I've been doing some listening to him and the dance/EDM genre in general and this is what I've come up with.
https://soundcloud.com/my-idiom/baby-dance-mix-m-blair-2016It's not meant to be an Avicii copy, I'm not that good, it's a Yodasdad original
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Some slight changes to arrangement from the original but a whole different direction in terms of genre.
Thanks to those of you who commented first time around, it was very useful feeback and proves what a valuable resource this forum is.
If you would like to compare to the first version, it's still up on my soundcloud alongside this one.
Baby - © M Blair
Verse
Every time I see you It hurts me inside...coz
you give off a coldness your eyes just can't hide
Do you really want me or are you just playing games.
Verse
When i touch your body I feel you withdraw...and
Any time I kiss you you never want more
I can't help but want you but do you still feel the same
Bridge
When your near me I start burnin up my body's on fire, and I think I like it
But do you feel the heat do I ignite your body and and mind won'y you tell me tell me
Chorus
Baby, are you thinking bout me lately baby
Or are you calling someone else
Baby don't you know it's driving me crazy
Are you leadin me on
Verse
If you dont want me just be straight with me please...coz
I'm really struggling with the signals recieved
You say you love me but there's something that's just not right
Verse
Are you spending time with somebody else...and
When your with me are you thinkin of them
If Im wrong then why won't you put up a fight.
Middle 8
When it all breaks down, when i’m not around don’t you tell me your lonely
we’ve both made mistakes but baby all it takes is just a second to phone me
just stop playing games, before it gets to late
I’ll forgive it all, it can be like before but I’m not gonna wait