Hi All,
New to the forum. Curious to see what will follow. Looking for any criticism on lyrics, composition, production, flow. But foremost looking for someone who can sing this song the way it should be sung.
B.t.w.: some people tend to really fully believe the lyrics, so just in case: don't worry about me
Song:
https://soundcloud.com/joosttel/i-bleedLyrics:
I BleedThis is the part where all went wrong
Where all my secrets, all my lies
Came in the light, before your eyes
Where there's no turning back
Some people ask me how I feel
I show a smile, that's no big deal
and wonder: man, are you for real
do you have a clue
I bleed inside
and hide the pain with false delight
I bleed, I'm done
my dearest blood has gone
Our love just gently, slowly died
to see that stop, that was alright
but when I cry in bed all night
it's about the two
Life is a mess because of me
And as the weeks become a year
My solitude turns into fear
What should a father do?
I bleed inside
and hide the pain with false delight
I bleed, I'm done
my dearest blood has gone
(guitar solo)
Life is a mess because of me
And as the weeks become a year
My solitude turns into fear
What should a father do?
I bleed inside
and hide the pain with false delight
I bleed, I'm done
my dearest blood has gone