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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: .Don't Blame Me ... finished i think
« Last post by Elvis Nash on Today at 01:29:50 PM »
Producers: Justin Morgan BZ Lewis Gavin Jones, there's a few more session players not mentioned . Its a lot of work , Start to finish . Well for them , I don't do much really ,I'm kinda lazy . do you wanna sing this again ? well it probably won't be any better then the last 4 takes , So I'm going fishing.
thanks man 
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Feedback on Finished songs / Nothing Wrong
« Last post by kevysc on Today at 11:00:03 AM »
It's been a few weeks since I have been here, lots going on, but nice to see both new and familiar artists on here. Here's another one from me ... look forward to comments

https://soundcloud.com/kevinism1961/nothing-wrong


Nothing Wrong

V1
Is there a place that you call home?
Where it's okay to be alone?
Your silence hides how you feel about me
I find it hard to understand
How you can leave things so unplanned
It makes no sense that you want to be with me

Pre-Chorus
There are times when everything's alright
But I don't think I want to be here with you tonight

Chorus
There's nothing wrong, nothing wrong with me
There's nothing wrong, nothing wrong with me

V2
In shadows deep, lost in the night
You cut a sad and lonely sight
Your silence screams "Will you please help me?"
You are the other side of me
The person I don't want to me
So please let go, please will you set me free?

Pre-chorus

Chorus

Chorus

There's nothing wrong
There's nothing wrong


P.S. I am trying to build up followers on Soundcloud, so please take the time to follow me and I will reciprocate :)
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What would you dream
« Last post by Jazz101 on Today at 11:00:00 AM »
Hi Kevin,
Thank you for your feedback, it is really appreciated and I believe invaluable for moving forward, we are always learning so thanks again,

George
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: You
« Last post by kevysc on Today at 10:55:37 AM »
@subvibe  Another excellent production. This one is a little more jazzy than your others (not a bad thing :) and I get the sense you have played around more with the instrumentation too. Some lovely little flourishes. Vocal great as always, Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: What would you dream
« Last post by kevysc on Today at 10:52:45 AM »
@jazz101 Really nice vocals (and backing vocals) and some good piano work. Interesting lyrical idea. Perhaps "dream" is a little overused? However, overall a solid production, Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Escaping
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on Today at 10:52:18 AM »
Hola a todos!
This one is different, a bit gitana and mysterious, I hope...




I run I run I r un
the night is cold
I run I run I run
the fog wraps the street lamps

I run I run I run
leaving behind
the steam of my breath
of my breath

Streets and more streets
with no name

North South East West
the Rose of Winds
is slept
in the bones of yesterday
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Ripe Old Age
« Last post by kevysc on Today at 10:49:11 AM »
@ChrisPrice  As I said on another forum another fantastic rocker from you. Great to hear a different take on AI :)  Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Do You Dare?
« Last post by kevysc on Today at 10:47:40 AM »
@Paul V  Great to hear you back on the forum again! This is a lovely song, with some great touches with subtle instrumentation throughout (love the funky guitar, for example). Great dynamics and a super overall restrained but highly effective production. Your voice is in fine form (and you still sound like Paddy McAloon :) ). Great lyrics and a lovely tribute to your Mam. Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: .Don't Blame Me ... finished i think
« Last post by kevysc on Today at 10:43:30 AM »
@Elvis Nash  Fabulous production, so whoever is helping you with it is doing a great job :)  At least as good as anything you would hear on the radio,  this is another excellent piece of modern country rock. Well done, Kevin
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The Bar / Re: Leaving the country this year .
« Last post by shadowfax on Yesterday at 05:20:56 PM »
Yep!! it's downhill from here so we are getting out to a nice safe country, luckily my wife is Czech...
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