Has a good folky feel. I thought the chorus was particularly strong.
Phil.
Thanks Phil: Some of the others felt the chorus kind of "got out of pattern" which it does... but the music allows for it and the vocal makes it work. (I think)
Not surprised that you felt it flowed. I hear similar things in your lyrics that I try to figure out and they always work. You always throw some variety in. It always works out when I try to make your lyrics "sing."