I'm 15 years old and an aspiring songwriter. I've been taking in advice whilst writing, and this is a song I've just wrote. Its all from my personal experience, I was bullied, and so that's what the song is about. It would be good to get some opinions and advice. Thanks, Laura
I find it hard to believe that what you did to me
Was just innocent.
I’ve now moved on but I’m curious to know,
How do you live with that guilt inside?
You spouted your lies
Tried to mess up my life
And you succeeded, for a while.
But I’m over you now,
Commiserations.
And I thank you for all that the hurt that you caused me.
It happened to make me stronger.
You’re filled with guilt,
Congratulations,
Cause now my wounds have healed and the daggers you threw,
Are heading back, your way.
I’m now the winner
And you’re just a loser
That can no longer take me down.
You’re all alone
I’ve got all of my friends beside/behind me
And I have no sympathy!
I’m over you now,
Commiserations.
And I thank you for all that the hurt that you caused me.
It happened to make me stronger.
You’re filled with guilt,
Congratulations,
Cause now my wounds have healed and the daggers you threw,
Are heading back, your way.
How did it feel...?
Did you get some sort of buzz?
From making fun of me.
What made it start...?
Was it something I did?
That made me deserve the pain you gave me!
I’m over you now,
Commiserations.
And I thank you for all that the hurt that you caused me.
It happened to make me stronger.
You’re filled with guilt,
Congratulations,
Cause now my wounds have healed and the daggers you threw,
Are heading back, your way.
They’re headed back, your way.