I'm with man of simple pleasures. not really my kind of music, but I really enjoyed this! The repeating lines really worked for me, I caught myself singing along seconds after it came up (I think that's when you know you've got a real winner, when somebody else instantly clicks with your song). But I agree with montydog as well, some minor lyric changes would indeed improve it creativity wise - performance wise, it's fine as far as I'm concerned.
I've gotta agree with Apophenia too, the verses seem to drag out just a bit too much. I'm not necessarily saying to try and fill the gaps, but I think it could be shortened or sung a bit faster - not too much faster tho.
Overall, good work ABV. I believe you've really got something here. Songs like this where it instantly hooks you is what I like to hear. Being able to relate with listeners is key, and even though your avatar scares the s**t outta me, I'm definitely gonna watch out for more posts from you. Awesome job, my man!