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Songwriter Forum => Lyrics => Topic started by: Soul Punk on March 01, 2012, 03:46:14 PM
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let me know what you think guys
Dole Queue Underdog
An hour in the pouring rain, It isn't fun
waiting for bus to the soul destroyer to arrive
searched low but not high for jobs, there's none
call me what you want, sadly this is my life
It's kinda granted, easy champions come and go
praying that their tired spirits soldier on and on
Nobody remembers,
the dole queue underdog
Everyone forgets
The dole queue underdog
Well sir, I'd tell you where I'm from
but I haven't got any stories that are mine
so why don't we cut the shit right here
let's not waste anymore of each others time
It's kinda granted, easy champions come and go
praying that their tired spirits soldier on and on
Nobody remembers,
the dole queue underdog
Everyone forgets
The dole queue underdog
They say I've got heart, but I lack the guts
too scared to take the leap incase I fall
I'd do better if the man would tell me what's up
this isn't a fairytale, I'd like to say I stood tall
It's kinda granted, easy champions come and go
praying that their tired spirits soldier on and on
Nobody remembers,
the dole queue underdog
Everyone forgets
The dole queue underdog
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Good lyrics Soul Punk - but should be in the 'Lyrics' section now...
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Sorry about that didn't see the changes
Tone or whoevers availaable can you delete this and I will repost in lyrics
thanks
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let me know what you think guys
Dole Queue Underdog
An hour in the pouring rain, It isn't fun
waiting for bus to the soul destroyer to arrive
searched low but not high for jobs, there's none
call me what you want, sadly this is my life
It's kinda granted, easy champions come and go
praying that their tired spirits soldier on and on
Nobody remembers,
the dole queue underdog
Everyone forgets
The dole queue underdog
Well sir, I'd tell you where I'm from
but I haven't got any stories that are mine
so why don't we cut the shit right here
let's not waste anymore of each others time
It's kinda granted, easy champions come and go
praying that their tired spirits soldier on and on
Nobody remembers,
the dole queue underdog
Everyone forgets
The dole queue underdog
They say I've got heart, but I lack the guts
too scared to take the leap incase I fall
I'd do better if the man would tell me what's up
this isn't a fairytale, I'd like to say I stood tall
It's kinda granted, easy champions come and go
praying that their tired spirits soldier on and on
Nobody remembers,
the dole queue underdog
Everyone forgets
The dole queue underdog
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Splendid lyrics, soul punk
really good
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ah, i just put my reply in the reviews section...but anyway
this is really good, splendid, i think
well done, Soul Punk
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pretty good my man, pretty damn good indeed.
I rather like this, it makes you sound like you've got a lot of faith/hope
I dunno, its good thugh.
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Captures the feeling exactly. Nice lyriics :)
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Thanks guys much appreciated
trying to find my own voice so this is all good to hear