Hello, I hope you're all doing good. I'm looking for some feedback on a song I wrote...
Lyrics:
Oh, I put you first over everyone
what thanks did I get? You gave me none.
I gave it up, had nothing
You never gave, just took from me.
You are wayward, you are lost
You have no respect, but you have got
Issues and they're not my fault
Your troubles are what you have caused
You're an hurricane, just tearing down
You're a f*****g mess, with a body count
I tried to help you, but I think
Its someone else's turn to deal with it
Your life's been hard, trust me I know
I've been there too, but I don't go
To the dark places that you do
I'm not the same, but I've suffered too
That mouth of yours is nasty,
Its sad because you just can't see,
The trouble you cause by being bad,
and you take that as a compliment.
You are wayward, you are lost
You have no respect, but you have got
Issues and they're not my fault
Your troubles are what you have caused
You're an hurricane, just tearing down
You're a f*****g mess, with a body count
I tried to help you, but I think
Its someone else's turn to deal with it