Hi All, would appreciate your thoughts on this tune-
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AuujbJ2zA-LSgeN3JoEN4e23dk6tYA?e=gMeKw8Specifically around mixing/arangement-
1. Bass on the main riff is following guitar- would a walking pattern, or it's own line (problaby needing to drop D) make it more interesting/less relentless?
2. Are the drums too low in the mix?
3. Not sure about the backing vocals- are they needed?
Cheers all, here are the lyrics-
If you've kept your head down till now
It's time to stand high up and proud
Go go you big red fire engine go go
Strange how the rest of the world seems
So darn slow
Come take your place in a new state of Grace
Those lost without place now will
Soon be back
Lost lonely but loud
Pug ugly but proud
Down but unbowed
Welcome back
When glass ceilings bear down on you
Scratch like a diamond cut through
Melt through your chains see the newspapers burn burn
Rise to the skies see the haters all turn turn turn!
Come take your place in a new state of Grace
Those lost without place now will
Soon be back
Lost lonely but loud
Pug ugly but proud
Down but unbowed
Welcome back