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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: moraamarolaloba on April 21, 2024, 11:17:32 AM
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Hola chicos!
This song came to me in a very special day, just when I was realizing that Life is a constant battle and does not take into account how old we may be when it places us in front of another challenge to take on. When you think you can have a break, another pot falls on your head hahaha
I am the sane as always
adorning life and death
with words that give calm
to deal with fears an traps
hidden on this battelfield
I thought i was flying
I though I was running
but all things pass beyonnd any watch
The landscape painted by my steps
is being left behind behibd behind
so much life breathed
so many things sleeping
in the box of oblivion
as I walk
through the days
before my night arrives
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Dig that jazzy 3/4 feel @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) and the lofi drums fit in really well. As usual there's a great element of experimentation in your songs and they could never be called conventional - That's brilliant. I love some of the synth ear candy that is floating around in the background too - Super stuff as always
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Dig that jazzy 3/4 feel @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233) and the lofi drums fit in really well. As usual there's a great element of experimentation in your songs and they could never be called conventional - That's brilliant. I love some of the synth ear candy that is floating around in the background too - Super stuff as always
Gracias @pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) much appreciated.
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That sure is a cool vid , very nice Mora , Yup pots are always falling
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Hi mora
That 3/4 time is infectious, huh?
I've started my 2nd production in that time signature in the last 2 months
I'm only gradually discovering what I (with my limitations) can do with it.
With your song here
I hear the humour, almost slapstick
that I hear in a lot of 3/4
Nice psychedelic touches here and there, too.
Excellent, articulate guitar here too
That was a nice listen. 👌
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That sure is a cool vid , very nice Mora , Yup pots are always falling
Gracias @Elvis Nash (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22812) very kind, y sí, pots continue falling!! Would a good helmet be a solution? But that happens in comedy movies hahaha
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Hi @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233)
Lovely music and rhythm. It was a swing and life to it that really wakes one saw, making full use of the time sig. :)
Your words are poetry.
The landscape painted by my steps
is being left behind
Is a particularly thoughtful and reflective image.
Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed it immensely.
CCB
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Hi mora
That 3/4 time is infectious, huh?
I've started my 2nd production in that time signature in the last 2 months
I'm only gradually discovering what I (with my limitations) can do with it.
With your song here
I hear the humour, almost slapstick
that I hear in a lot of 3/4
Nice psychedelic touches here and there, too.
Excellent, articulate guitar here too
That was a nice listen. 👌
Do you know? My new song, the next one I am preparing, has that time of signature too, lately I feel this tempo wonderful for fusion.
Thank you so much @rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219)
glad to see you well
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Hi @moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233)
Lovely music and rhythm. It was a swing and life to it that really wakes one saw, making full use of the time sig. :)
Your words are poetry.
The landscape painted by my steps
is being left behind
Is a particularly thoughtful and reflective image.
Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed it immensely.
CCB
Your comments could serve as self-help against depression hahaha, I thank you very much, these days are being complicated, life is affected by spring and does unexpected things...
Thank you very much for appreciating my humble words.
Stay well @CorkingCrackBand (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=22974)
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@moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233)
You're probably the most original artist on here and you create a unique sound on everything you do. I see you as a poet / artists as opposed to a traditional songwriter as you do not follow any rules.
And that's a great thing but it makes it hard for me to review!!
The soundscape, mix and performance all sounds amazing.
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@moraamarolaloba (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21233)
You're probably the most original artist on here and you create a unique sound on everything you do. I see you as a poet / artists as opposed to a traditional songwriter as you do not follow any rules.
And that's a great thing but it makes it hard for me to review!!
The soundscape, mix and performance all sounds amazing.
Es verdad Nick, I think I am my own experiment and that makes me a bit... bizarre... but I know that my lyrics, using everyday simple and various colored words, help me make metaphors, something that I love, without them life for me would be very flat and I am not a flat-earther. hahaha
Thank you for your comment and sincerity.
Today is Tuesday? There are still days left in the week, I hope they are great for everyone.
@Nick Ryder (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=23004)