This one started out as a lyrics challenge: Write a song lyric that has a phrase from another language.
So - despite the title, I'm not really going anywhere - but I would appreciate any feedback - good bad or, constructive
https://soundcloud.com/paulcanuck/au-revoirAu RevoirAu revoir, mon ami, au revoir
Au revoir to the nights when we set the world on fire
I'll try to get by without your light in my life
Au revoir, mon ami, au revoir
Goodbye my dear friend goodbye
Goodbye to the nights when we laughed until we cried
I'll try to get by without your light in my life
Goodbye my dear friend goodbye
Au revoir, mon ami, au revoir
Au revoir to the times when we set the world on fire
I'll try to survive without your light in my life
Au revoir, mon ami
Au revoir, mon ami
Au revoir, mon ami
Goodbye.