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everything is going down (in the end)

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markbriscoe

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« Reply #15 on: November 07, 2014, 02:50:46 PM »
Really well done... Loved the edgy "uncertainty" of the rhythm,  an almost jazzy lilt fighting with more regular 4/4 overtones. Shades of Bono in the vocals that go perfectly with the whole piece. very well produced.

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« Reply #16 on: November 08, 2014, 08:58:36 AM »
Hey there;

:)

Oh! where did you dig this song out?
Ah, i see, it s in my signature.
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"uncertainty" of the rhythm"

Yes; thank you.

looking back, it s one of my favourite ones. I ll get to perform it live next weekend. *excited*

Tx man for listening :)

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AmirMaor

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« Reply #17 on: November 08, 2014, 11:07:07 AM »
Very good man, great voice, like it very much, tnx for sharing :)
My First English Song + Clip:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI

retrononomusic

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« Reply #18 on: November 11, 2014, 09:25:55 PM »
Man, you're full of surprises! :-)

Ok, I can tell you're talented just with little details, for example in the introduction when you stops singing and let only the drums play. It's risky, but it works very well and keeps me waiting. :-)
Again with the mandoline (is it?), very effective.

As usual your voice is great and kind of nonchalant here, suits the style!

The only thing I miss is an explosion on the first time you say the words : "in the end", but I guess it's a question of taste.

I think I can quote Radiohead or even Blur when I get this feeling that the song is taking me somewhere and I let go.

Clap clap!

Nono.

retrononomusic

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« Reply #19 on: November 13, 2014, 06:55:35 PM »
Do you have videos of your live sessions?

TheButcher

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« Reply #20 on: November 14, 2014, 09:07:06 AM »
Hi Amir and retro :)

Tx for your time.

it s cool; it s been a while since i wrote the song (maybe a year). Well, some songs kinda "disappear" from my mind. not this one; i think it s pretty cool. I ll be performing it tomorrow at a small "open stage" thing. i think i can upload a video next week.

i posted sth in the "open mic" section here on the board:

http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/open-mic!/

Hmmm; can t copy the link. Well; it s at the "open mic" section here on the board.
cheers
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AdrianBenjam

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« Reply #21 on: November 16, 2014, 01:58:00 PM »
Hi Butcher!

I like the light character of the song. It feels My favorite moment is when you sing the first words. It comes in quite bassy. Also I like the part "I m far away from you
" when the additional instruments come in. Nicely structured; i like it! :)

Cheers,
Adrian Benjamin