[bluephoenixnwo]

hey here are some songs i wrote, i need to improve them so i need people to hear them, and opinions! 
I use Logic Pro with a keyboard midi set up 

http://soundcloud.com/theemperorjohnandersontheiii/elastico

http://soundcloud.com/theemperorjohnandersontheiii/make-your-decision

http://soundcloud.com/theemperorjohnandersontheiii/red-october

any feedback will be appreciated 

[montydog]

Hi,
I would post one at a time if I were you. Wait to get feedback, respond, wait for the first track to drop off the first page of the review section and then post again with another song. Just my beginners advice.
 

[Binladeda]

just listened to Elastico....It made me smile ,... I'm a sucker for monotony and repetition, so I loved it....you've got an interesting groove going there, and it's nice to hear you letting loose with the vocals, but not so sure about the effect you're using. I Like the intro, and the ending is brilliant ...I think you need to build it up musically. A bass, melody, wherever your creative instincts lead you ....Anyway I enjoyed it as it is...Thanks

[bluephoenixnwo]

just listened to Elastico....It made me smile ,... I'm a sucker for monotony and repetition, so I loved it....you've got an interesting groove going there, and it's nice to hear you letting loose with the vocals, but not so sure about the effect you're using. I Like the intro, and the ending is brilliant ...I think you need to build it up musically. A bass, melody, wherever your creative instincts lead you ....Anyway I enjoyed it as it is...Thanks

thank you, i dont like my own voice so i put the effects on to make it bearable 

[domstone86]

Interesting track! I like the subtle additions.

Those are groove maps from Kontakts Modern Drummer librarty though aren't they? If so, I'd recommend a bit of tweaking once you put them in the mix, just to give it more authenticity.

I used to put loads of effects on my voice, that'll lessen with time and practice