[alvagorn]

I hope you like it and give me feedback. Thanks for listening;)
https://soundcloud.com/alvagorn-1/you-make-these-little-things

 Lyrics by: Álvaro Gil Íñigo

You make these little things happen

VERSE1
By night I was feeling alone
A desert of lights and shadows
The sheets were cold as stone
Then You know how it follows

VERSE 2
I was living in a big attic
Caressing the city lights
At first I felt some panic
Now I believe I could fly

BRIDGE
I met you four years ago
Maybe it was a coincidence
You'd never been there before

CHORUS
When I see you eating an apple
I feel I could win all the battles
You make these little things happen

VERSE3
We started living together
Your arms became my home
Hold me honey for ever
Your embrace makes my grow

VERSE4
Our love grows, a cake with leaven
And this distance will not win
I don't believe in heavens
You're my angel without wings

BRIDGE
I met you four years ago
Maybe it was a coincidence
You'd never been there before

CHORUS
When I see you eating an apple
I feel I could win all the battles
You make these little things happen

[Neil C]

Builds nicely, I like it when the 2nd vocal came in.

Neil
 

[Saeed AlSuri]

Very nice song .. alvagorn..

I enjoyed the music .. loved the structure of the lyrics in the melody ..

Good mode change in the 2nd verse .. brief but nice .. but sad no guitar solo even short tiny one ..

Great song ..

Cheers

[benjo]

hi alvergorn,

enjoyed this tune builds up nice
second vocalist has great rasp to his voice
got to be honest though me personaly
i didn't like the chorus lyrics at all
it made me cringe good music and vocals then

        WHEN I SEE YOU EATING AN APPLE
        I FEEL I COULD WIN ALL THE BATTLES
        YOU MAKE THESE LITTLE THINGS HAPPEN

if there is a special mening to these words
maybe i just miss it
only my opinion everyone will get something different from it

               well done mate...