You get what you deserve

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GiulianiBlue

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« on: January 24, 2012, 10:37:44 PM »
You're conficted,Don't go furder
A fare Trial after murder
Thats the way it goes
You tried to run but everybody knows
You couldnt do right, ok
You digged a deep whole
Send the truth away

Difficult situation, you lost control
Silent moment, you need some to say
This i never could have known
I see you didnt pray
Now youre sentenced away

Put your hands on your back
You're pled guilty for a nasty crime
Rewind and play cause we dont have all day
When did it begin? Is it still on?
You really want a piece of me?
Im here standing in front you
Not a piece but the all of me
You can't make life a hard time
no not mine no not mine

I tried so hard to avoid
So who gets the blame for your filthy work?
You seem to be psycho and paranoid
Nothing more than a yerk

Painful life? Show the scars
Troubled youth? Oh the stolen cars?
Feel like an alien? Or a stranger? Then find your way up to mars
Now you got nowhere to go when you are tight up behind bars

Funny moment? When you confess
You are gonna pay for it, so clean up the mess
This was not the easiest way to impress
Go sell your story to the press
You get nothing or less

Whats the motive? Tell me now
Feel like a winner, take of your crown
Is this the way to live? Dont be proud

You work just like a pro
Sellin shit and sniffin snow
Who could have quessed that this could ever turn out so nasty
Oh, no dont you dare to look at me

You are simple someone i wish wouldnt last, forever and ever
And i, i can hardly hold myself together
And this is aint getting better
You are someone i wish i didnt knew
I told you, you are the love my life
We are gonna make it together
But now i am so over you

And in the end you get what you deserve
Take it E/Z

Aria Gracefield

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« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2012, 11:34:44 PM »
Hey,
Again, I like what you have to say for yourself and I like the attitude, I think there are a few conflicting lines and again think it would be good to hear a demo but overall you seem like a pretty talented lyricist

GiulianiBlue

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« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2012, 11:58:05 PM »
Thanks alot;)
Im not a singer or anything .. I do only words.. No demo.

English is not my first language so i make sometimes crazy typos anf stuff xD
Take it E/Z