hello guys.
Sorry for my bad English. I'm struggling with writing a text in English, for a song that I wrote. Is not my habit write the lyrics of the songs. I only write the music (rock genre).
The song in question is a dedication to my partner. He speaks primarily of sexual freedom of expression, tolerance, judgment, etc. ...
The text is 90% complete, but unfortunately I'm stuck with a sentence beginning and towards the end of the song.
The words in black are the final versions of the text. The phrases in construction are the red ones. I hope it is not too complicated to create the right metric without a melodic reference. If necessary, I could also post the audio track...Please, help me!
Here's the lyrics:
song title Follow de Brand (de Brand is a last name of Cristina de Brand):
Guys i need your attention (I'm not convinced of this)
one four hundred on tex
six or four eleven ten four
of her circus of sex (I evaluate alternatives)
She's one red four one eighty bronze
nine one ten eight one bright
makes it feel your sexation
neck one Red four one five
(chorus)
now we follow de Brand
now we follow de Brand
raise your glass to your freedom
comes to your funny band;
now we follow de Brand
now we follow de Brand
leave all your preconceptions
we don't needed whip-hand
she does not loves to label
but a lot do often
they say that she make scandal
two one four eight and ten
but she knows how to beat the rap
in dull bustle of crowd
to their glances of ten yard
she replies by her sound
(chorus)
now we follow de Brand
now we follow de Brand
by this side of the river
we can dance and have fun
now we follow de Brand
now we follow de Brand
come on jump up and over
no one here will be banned
and doesn't matter what your sex
if you're white or you're black
what she really sees in you guys
is your heart and your head
Seven yellow one hundred five (right)or(us) rhymes
eighteen pink hundred bus (us) rhymes
it is nice and makes you feel alright
so guys sing all with us
(chorus)
do not judge what she does
do not judge what we does
don't be serf of conventions
it isn't right it isn't wrong
do not judge what she does
do not judge what he does
do without all your phantoms
what is right? what is wrong?
(bridge)
"by de Brand we can feel all right
and you won’t need to repress yourself
we are ready to sing all night
and all night we continue to yell yeah!"
(chorus)
So we follow de Brand
now we follow de Brand
no one man and no woman
will no longer be tagged
and do not judge what she does
do not judge what we does
it's uselèss to feel guilty
it isn't right it isn't wrong...
“so we follow, we follow de brand now we follow,
we follow de brand now we follow... ad lib"
