[Mark Ryan]

In Scotland we have a phrase for songs of this quality.................PISH 

[Saeed AlSuri]

 

[beckylucythomas]

You can get some really, really helpful feedback on this forum, and you can also learn a huge amount by listening to/reading others' posts (and contributing), so if i were you I'd be more concerned with that than with just how you score out of ten....

With your piece, the most interesting thing for me was (potentially) the lyrics, but unfortunately i couldn't hear them properly, and you didn't post them up...

Good luck and enjoy the forum... (And read the sticky notes!! They genuinely will help you get the most out of this!)

[benjo]

hey,

I totally agree with you Allan, but there are so many that come on here
post there stuff for comments but will not take the time to comment on other peoples work
it is ignorant, the only time you see some names is by their own work,
i'm getting started here, I better leave it,

  GIVE FEED BACK TO GET FEED BACK PLEASE IT'S ONLY FAIR THAT GOES FOR YOU ALL
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[Jess]

  YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE...

BIG BROTHER IS WATCHING YOU

[Saeed AlSuri]

Oh my .. we have Big Brother Here .. watching us ??

very nice ..

[Dogmax]

Well Marc

Nice i like it, sound to me like you're creating your own style but i think you know you need to work on it, the best way to do that is to start communicating with other songwriters that's what Feedback is all about and also it help to get your music out there to a wider audience, it also help to build up your confidence.

I see you have a video with this song i think that the one you should have posted, it also sound to me like you're new to this so my advice is dive in, don't think about just do it.

Welcome to the forum Marc.