a song i wrote after watching the moon chase a sunset.
i'm pretty unsure of this song, would appreciate feedback.
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lunar eclipse:
lonely moon, in a pink sky
tangerine blue, like a blind eye
searching forever for the light and the source of his love
glowing sun, setting slowly
creating dusk, to hide the lonely
end for us and ending of the day
and the moon he is trying to steal the tears from the earth
he's chasing his love through horizons until his heart bursts
half of him's shining and half of him's filled with shadows
and the only thing that changes is how much of it he shows
searing sun, over our heads
noon turns the shadows, all to dust again
the bridges and buildings all wither and turn to rust
this lonely moon, hangs his pale head
low in the sky, chased away again
sneaks out of sight and sneaks out of mind
cuz every now and then he's held in a lunar eclipse
and he forgets a thing like love could even exist
so he tugs at the ocean for letting his life slip away
and he forgets it's just his view of the world that gets in his way