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New version here
__________________________I just finished the last recordings for my contribution to the
Pawprint Challenge and thought I'd post the preliminary mix here for you guys to review and help me straighten out some of the flaws in it.
One Sided LoveHabiTat posted some lyrics for the Pawprint Challenge
here and I changed some bits and added a few lines to them, so thanks again, hab
I'm not quite finished with the song, I still have to do a proper mix of it and I might re-do some of the vocals. If any of the vocalists on here want to give it a go, just give me a shout. (After all it's for a good cause
)
I'm grateful for any feedback, tips, critique... etc, so thanks for listening
Oh right,... the lyrics
V1
Our love is one sided
But I won't give up
I'm sure you'll return one day
I'm cold and abandoned
Stuck in this place
It must be to help me
It must be to help me I say
V2
You left me with nothing
Just a towel and a bowl
It ran empty the day it went down
I'm sure you'll return though
One day my friend
Cause I can't see why
I can't see why you'd let me down
CHORUS
When we were younger, we walked in the park
Played fetch and had cuddles and rolled in the grass
But I guess you're no kid anymore
Cause now you are busy doing different things
You smoke and you drink and don't care about me
And I'll just be waiting out here by the door
V3
It's not the hunger
That bothers me now
It's the pain that I feel in my heart
You've left me out here now
For seven long days
And I can't raise a whimper
I can't raise a whimper to bark
V4
Being alone's not
A walk in the park
Like the ones we had when I was young
This one sided love's
getting too much to bear
And yet I can't escape
Cause I Don't have the strength left to run
BRIDGE
I never imagined
In my nice comfy home
How cold it would feel
To be all on my own
A pat on the back's
All I Want in the end of the day
CHORUS
EDIT:
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New version here
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