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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Works in Progress => Topic started by: Krysoe on December 25, 2021, 02:52:56 PM
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Between all of the more classical work, I'm busy on at the moment, I'm working on this song written for my wife and she don't know, so sh.....
The evening We will celebrate that we have been married for 50 years the song will be performed by me and my band.
First of all, I'm looking for feedback on the lyrics as English is not my first language. but of cause, if you have any feedback on the composition as well you are more than welcome.
Thanks in advance for your support
/ Klaus
SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/klaus-rysoe/my-only-you?si=094182dd6a6046399671c5367b03f950&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
Lyrics:
V1)
Silence
nighttime
the moon is shining
in the sky
as a pearly gate
between the stars
where the fallen angels fly
where they fly….
CH)
All the time - and
All the years
with you my friend
with fun and tiers
days with time
to pray and hope
Days to laugh and
days to cray
days with wine
to make us high
days to sing a song
for those who are lost
when skies are gray
around the globe
you make me smile
you make me hope
for an endless life
with you
My only you
V2)
Darling - my sweetheart
fifty years for you and me
take my hand and let us say
we will enjoy it all the way
until the day
we fade away