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Passion

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ghaw2007

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« on: July 08, 2016, 04:15:44 PM »
Passion

Verse 1
The fierce notion of something exciting about to happen
Intense like a raging bull
It can't be contained, it can't be withheld
Powerful like a nuclear weapon
Valuable like gold

Verse 2
The jolt of energy being used
To create something long-lasting
Strong and bold
Secure and proud
Dreams are realized
And joy is flowing through you
Challenging to attain
But once you have it, exploration is boundless

Verse 3
The light of life guiding the way
Along valleys and mountains
When you're focused and determined
There's so much that you can do
Maximizing your strength is always a good thing
You put yourself in a less vulnerable position
Controlling where you venture and how you get there
Will allow you to become more of yourself

Chorus
Without passion, you breathe just to exist
And not be alive
You're on auto-pilot
Senses function properly
But there's no spark of vitality
You're merely a collection of bones and flesh
Pushed through time
Insignificant at best
You can flourish beyond measure

Written by B. (Sunday, August 31, 2014)
Copyright 2014

diademgrove

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« Reply #1 on: July 08, 2016, 07:20:52 PM »
Welcome to the forum ghaw.

Sorry but your lyrics don't really do much for me. You take a lot of words to tell me to be powerful and controlling. I'm not sure I agree with the sentiments, seems like just an excuse to be selfish.

Feel free to ignore me if you disagree.

Looking forward to reading your comments on other people's lyrics.

Keith

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« Reply #2 on: July 09, 2016, 01:28:39 AM »
greetings ghaw

you are overposting and pushing your luck.  
this space is not a personal showcase.
this is a forum and it works by interaction between its members, give and take.
commenting and contributing on each others work.

please read the guidelines and reciprocate unselfishly before you post anything else.


i may not believe this tomorrow...

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Vintage54

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« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2016, 07:25:44 PM »

   Hi there,
      This sounds more like a lesson than a song, but it's not without merit and you clearly have talent. I see enough here to convince me of better things to come.

                              Vintage54