Hi guys,
Here's a song I posted a few years ago, but I thought I'd post it again for some fresh feedback. I'm thinking of doing a remix, so would like any thoughts on how I might improve it
The lyrics to this song came to me in a dream...I hope there not too hippy trippy
https://soundcloud.com/crystalsuzy/the-package-cI got a package in the mail today
Addressed to me in a peculiar way
To a child of life, since her youth
Has been struggling for years just to find the truth
Out there looking hard, for truth
I opened it very cautiously
It wasn't paid for, no COD
Inside was a crystal, a falling star
A long moon beam and an empty jar
And a note that read something, like this
Now that falling star don't make you wish
On that long moon beam I've sent a kiss
Just fill that jar and come for a ride
Signed a secret admirer, from the other side
I pondered this very carefully
Why was this package sent to me
Just then that crystal began to shine
It showed me something that blew my mind
And I knew just what I had to do
So I put my troubles in that empty jar
Sent my dreams on that moonbeam way out far
And that shining star I clutched real tight
And the truth that is love, came to me in the night
I got a package in the mail today
Addressed to me in a peculiar way
To a child of life, since her youth
Has been struggling for years just to find the truth
Out there looking hard, for truth, for truth, for truth