Ok, my first proper review. You've got a lot of positive reviews so good on ya. For me it's just not my thing. That's just me and I'm sure some people who like medieval 80s sounding prog rock will love it. I'm gonna be honest though as there's no point in not saying what you think....
I think the production sounds very dated.
I think the subject matter is somewhat dubious but original.
Your voice sounds good.
I didn't connect with the song emotionally which for me (maybe not all) is important.
Hope you don't mind my somewhat blunt response, keep it up, I may love your next song. Not that it matters what I think anyway.
All the best,
Chris.