[paulmclay]

This was originally a text to my girlfriend, which then became poem and I am now thinking of making it a song. I've not written a love song before, so maybe just leave it be. Not sure.

Yes I love you.
I love you with all my heart.
I love you with all my soul.
I love you with every breath.
I love you with every thought.
I love you with every word I write.
I love you with every chord I play.
I love you when the sun wakes up.
I love you when the moon comes out.
I love you when I am sad.
Then everything is ok.
I love you.
I love you forever.

[Lyrycalsoulz]

I think this could be really catchy if the track goes well and the melody goes well with the lyrics you have. sweet

[SOS]

I like the repetitive "I Love you" bit, I reckon it could work really well with the correct accompaniment

[Saeed AlSuri]

Yes we love you to play it for us ..

lets hear it man .. put it to track ..

nice repetition ..

Cheers