So far so good, honestly. Go me bough I think a lot of the issues I had were just the choice of adjectives! I feel, instead of "plastic" maybe "artificial"? You should play around with the synonyms of words and see what flows better, think of it as a vision. To me, plastic is too boring of a word. But to read "artificial" I feel it really would capture the reader. Especially with a title like "artificial love". You do have a story here which is good! And the structure, to me, is great as well! In the verses though I would play around with the synonym of words, "flexible" etc.. Other than that I enjoyed it!