The piece that begins "I don't understand this fear based ideology" is Perfect to my ears.
I would suggest building the entire song around that piece and making it a repeating chorus. Specifically, I'd like to hear it three times instead of just twice. To my ears, it's perfect both musically, lyrically, and in terms of vocal timing.
I understand the use of multiple rapid tempo rhymes to create a sense of confusion and insanity. . . but I'm not sure it isn't overdone. Specifically, I felt the first verse was excessively confused. In fact, the following verses were perfect to my ears.
I also felt that some sequence changes could have helped convey this idea better. I don't have time tonight, but I'll look again tomorrow with a specific suggestion to open with one of the later verses, and move the first verse down in the sequence. From memory, I think that the piece that begins "7 billion people spinning through space" would be an extremely appropriate opening set of lines.
Most of all, I felt that the vocal timing on that first set of rapid fire rhymes could have been smoother and allowed the listener a greater "access" to the lyrics.
Paulads mentioned "there's enough great stuff in there for two or three songs." There is.... but (in this case, and only this case) I feel that it would reach more listeners if there were only one song's worth of great lines and a tighter focus.
I think this can get a lot better and do not suggest "leave everything exactly as it is."
Hope this helps. I'm rooting for this song to get better.
Took a second listen and modified some of my observations.
BTW..... I loved the long, spoken lead-out.