Good strong rhythm and you were really consistent with the tempo. I always have trouble with speeding up, so good job!
Recommendations: I'd like to see the lyrics posted with the song; I couldn't understand all the words. And, if you're going to use a video, I'd like to see more of you. For instance, I would rather you were facing a little more toward the camera (not necessarily directly facing the camera, but a little at an angle would be nice) and I would like to see the action of you beating on the drum (like, be far enough away from the camera so I can see the drum and your hands as you play). Another alternative would be to post the song on SoundCloud or something similar as just a sound file, but for something like this, I think I would prefer the video so I can watch you perform. For me, it is part of the song.