Apologies, but I stopped reading at the 'C' word.
This is interesting.. I have a complicated relationship with the “c” word…
In Ireland, there are places were it is widely used and not seen as “extreme” and many of my friends including my husband come from one of these places. So I am used to them using it frequently and without causing offence. I expect that this is the case for other parts of the English-speaking world too.
However I grew up somewhere where this wasn’t the case so it was always seem as a fairly hardcore, extreme curse word.
I also think it's something to do with the very hard "c" sound - in the same way that "cock" sounds much harsher than "prick" (for example).
I have two daughters - both in their late teens and their circle of friends frequently use it and don’t take offence at its use. They’ve kind of claimed it in an empowering way.
Having said that, in my home, it’s not acceptable in general use / conversation but at the same time I don’t have a problem with it. We Irish curse A LOT!
So I think if you’re bothered to review a lyric, it’s logical to me that you might object to the use of the c-word but why on earth would you not just make that point and review the lyric? Or say nothing? Not post at all? To write off a whole lyric because of the use of one word seems bizarre to me..
So… to the lyric - I’m intrigued.. I don’t understand it fully but then I never do with your lyrics and that’s why I like them so much.
Looking forward to hearing the song..
K
one syllable word of profanity. no doubt Rightly They get pissed off like everyone else . But in the Christian market genre they usually don't use profanity in lyrics . Praise the lord and all that .
I write a lot of religious songs , Its a staple in country music . there's some killer Jesus songs . Whatever a writer wants to say is fine with me . Major Christian songs stray away from profanity. but they're devout Christians . Back to your song , I was kinda thinking this hook had to be been done , and it has. Just for the sake of competition. You would have to beat her song.