Hi there,
I pitched an earlier version of this track a few months backs. I appreciate all the feedback you gave then. I switched the vocal to mine (sorry) because of the range, and also introduced a chorus. I'm not still not sure about the chorus, and would appreciate feedback on that - and any bits of the song that stick or annoy, or don't feel right.
Many thanks
Calm
https://soundcloud.com/michelleapatrick/the-journeyThe Journey
I fell under a train, on St Swithin's Day.
I was heading out of town, almost on my way.
We waited impatiently, in a familiar place.
I saw the train arrive, when someone stepped into my space.
I heard the people cry, no I never could walk a straight line.
A grace came over me, I knew it was my time.
I could feel I was crossing over, it was a beautiful free fall.
I see Angels, in the face of a stranger.
I see colour, where you see grey.
I've seen Angels in the face of a stranger.
I want you to know how far I have come.
Through the crowds, through the dark -
through the hardest part.
I could feel I was crossing over,
it was a beautiful free fall.
As I walked that Holy trail, I knew I wasn't leaving you.
From behind that Holy veil, I knew I wasn't leaving you.