I think it is tough to read lyrics along with a song as for me it is as much about how the lyrics are used (rhythm, delivery etc.) than the words themselves so I gave up and listened to the edited version instead
It is quite a nice piece of background music and there are some lovely textures going on - especially the faint, low, drone
I am completely with SCHAV on this one - a heavy beat and bass kicking in would transform the track
I would like to hear this re-worked into a dance floor smash! - perhaps you should contact DUTCHBEAT if you need any help or direction for a more modern "dancey" sound