[katygalloway]

Hi

I would love any feedback/critique of my country song News For You! Wrote this last night and would love your opinion!!

News For You

Verse 1
I thought I’d heard it all,
Every excuse, every argument,
That you could come up with,
But you keep coming back,
With a new way to make me feel small,
To make me feel worthless

Chorus
So why should I, listen to you
When you don’t even let me speak,
You seem, to think
That the whole world
Should revolve around you
Well, then, I got news for you

Verse 2
You’re just so unreasonable
What’s the point? Anymore!
So I’ll just sit back
And let you carry on
But I’m not listening
To a word you say

Chorus

Bridge
You think you’re all that
With your chat chat chat
Can’t you see that no one cares?
Well, then, I got news for you

Chorus.

[S.T.C]

i think it will sound just fine once music`s been added...reads like a country song.

[Neil C]

Hi, and welcome,
I think this belongs in the lyrics section - unless you've got music to share, so if you ask one of the lovely moderators ( often found in The Bar ) they'll move this across where I'm sure it'll get well reviewed, its very active and friendly.
 
Neil