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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: wduarte on December 19, 2017, 02:58:24 AM

Title: You Already Know
Post by: wduarte on December 19, 2017, 02:58:24 AM

Hey guys, that's my first song in english, but a demo because I'm not a good writer in this language. So I make this song for someome better sing it, you can get the idea. (I'm not a singet neither)

ps. I'm new here, sorry if I'm posting in a wrong way/place

https://soundcloud.com/user-253269370-646372164/how-i

You Already Know
W. Duarte

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I was too excited to move on
Sorry, but tonight I just can't stay
Will I stop trying of holding on?
How many times do I have to say

What you already know
You already know
How I feel
How I feel
You already know
How does it feels

I cried too many times to say goodbye
Walking in circles doesn't help you grow
If this is love why we need to fight?
It's clear that I got to let this go

‘Cause you already know
You already know
How I feel
How I feel
We already know
How does it feels
And it hurts
That's how I feel
You already know

When you already know
You already know
How I feel
How I feel

Title: Re: You Already Know
Post by: 2tuoo on December 19, 2017, 11:09:36 AM

Nice tune!

Can you add lyrics to your post?

Title: Re: You Already Know
Post by: wduarte on December 20, 2017, 01:23:28 AM

Quote from: 2tuoo on December 19, 2017, 11:09:36 AM

Nice tune!

Can you add lyrics to your post?

Thanks!
I did.

Sorry my first post

Title: Re: You Already Know
Post by: wduarte on December 20, 2017, 01:28:21 AM

I'm thinking in transform this song in a dubset song... What you think?