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YOURS FOR THE TAKING
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montydog
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Reply #15 on:
September 06, 2016, 11:30:58 AM »
I'm with Binladida - perfect slice of power pop. It has it all - the biting electric rhythm guitar, liquid lead playing and pounding bass. Your vocal is gritty and authoritative.
There are a lot of lyrics but they don't get in the way of the basic power of the song.
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CaliaMoko
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September 06, 2016, 03:43:37 PM »
Just so you know I'm not ignoring you...I always find your work excellent, and this piece is no exception. I'm really not qualified to judge it, and I can't think of anything to say that hasn't already been said, anyway.
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CANDEETA
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September 07, 2016, 09:47:19 PM »
Hi Jambrains,
Love the guitar sound on this. Good words too.
Nice one!
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Alan Starkie
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September 07, 2016, 10:47:03 PM »
An interesting downward vocal melody in the verses but enjoyable all the same.
I would have liked some hard rocking drum sounds. They're a little too quantised for me but they did the job.
Agree with The Knack comment both with the late 70's feel and guitar riffs.
The double-tracked vocals that are spread wide apart need to be a little tighter but listening on headphones probably didn't help.
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Oldbutyet
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September 10, 2016, 10:19:05 PM »
Without a doubt you got a great live stage song here but whatever you do dont end it that quickly, im not lying when i say this reminds me of dance floors, youth years and just having great fun enjoying great music and songs and dancing with a girl that enjoys it to, brings back great memories, thanks you
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Craig Watkins
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September 10, 2016, 10:47:32 PM »
Wow the production on this track is second to none!
Great track power pop all over love it!
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irwin
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September 11, 2016, 12:00:06 AM »
To me this production I love the most, but Awesome writing vocal also. What a good song. Keep it up.
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