Hi guys! Long time since I posted anything in finished songs. I've been a bit busy with work and band projects buuut I'm always a lurker on here and am loving everyone's output.
I posted this in the WIP section a few months back but now it's finished. It's my attempt at a sort of disco/dance tune. As always, really appreciate any and all feedback especially on melody and production. Thanks in advance!
https://soundcloud.com/jack-simmons-1/disco-demoLyrics:
Lights go down
You show me there is beauty in a frown
Tell me something new about your day
just to pass the time in an offhand way
Tell me how
a smile can turn a doomed day upside down
Even in the morning when I'm feeling worst
you are not a demon, you are not a curse
Later when you get home from work
I know it might sound a bit absurd
Put some time aside, aside to check in on me
Everything's a phase apart from you
I've found a way to make it through these lonely days and nights
You set these dark days of mine ablaze
when you walked in to my life from out of your own cold
your own cold, and now you're mine to hold
Some nights
That little bit of life can pass you by
I stayed dressed in her bedroom
listened to the water while we stared at the moon
I fall back in time
There are certain songs that still make me cry
Curse the DJ and his empty head
Get me back home, get me to my bed
But then you go and call me up
mispronounce a word and it picks me up
Put some time aside, aside, make me happy
Everything's a phase apart from you
I've found a way to make it through these lonely days and nights
You set these dark days of mine ablaze
when you walked in to my life from out of your own cold
your own cold, and now you're mine to hold
Heavy heart
I guess I'm always cursed to have a heavy heart
Put me on a plane going anywhere
Put me on a train somewhere, I don't care
Lights go down
You show me there is beauty in a frown
Tell me something new about your day
just to pass the time in an offhand way
Everything's a phase apart from you
I've found a way to make it through these lonely days and nights
You set these dark days of mine ablaze
when you walked in to my life from out of your own cold
your own cold, and now you're mine to hold
Everything's a phase apart from you
I've found a way to make it through these lonely days and nights
You set these dark days of mine ablaze
when you walked in to my life from out of your own cold
your own cold, and now you're mine to hold
Everything's a phase apart from you
I've found a way to make it through these lonely days and nights
You set these dark days of mine ablaze
when you walked in to my life from out of your own cold
your own cold, and now you're mine to hold