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Crazy Life
Verse
Just another teenage girl,
Living in a big ol' city,
Working on a dream,
But she won't tell nobody,
While she's hoping,
Heartache is worlds away,
She's still stuck in school,
So it could happen any day,
Pre chorus
She's stays out of view,
While everyone wants to be on top,
Hugs her notebook and pen,
'Cause lyrics are all she's got
Chorus
Welcome to her crazy life,
Where everything is upside down,
And everybody is racing for,
The popularity crown
Verse
The girl leaves school with,
A notebook and guitar,
Playing in bars all night,
To make her dreams go far,
One day she move to America,
To make that dream come true,
But when she gets there,
Everything's still like high school,
Pre chorus
She stays out of view,
While everyone wants to be on top,
Hugs her notebook and pen,
'Cause lyrics all she's got
Chorus
Welcome to her crazy life,
Where everything is upside down,
And everybody is racing for,
The popularity crown,
Bridge
This teenage girl,
Now a woman of 25,
Her dreams haven't come true,
But they're still alive
Pre chorus
No matter where she goes,
Everyone wants to be on top,
Now she hugs her children close,
'Cause they're the best things she's got
Chorus
Welcome to her crazy life,
Where everything is upside down,
And everybody is racing for,
The popularity crown,
She no longer cares though,
As she settles down