I instantly got a melody in my head when reading it, your good at doing that! its short, but I don't think it needs any more, as what you have already all seems significant and anything else could maybe be deemed filler.
Great little chorus, with a catchy hook that you've repeated throughout. The only part that I personally think could be altered is 'Another to dwell so close to my soul'. it makes good sense but to me didn't really fit with the rest of the verse in terms of potential sound. But then again if you already have the music for it, then I understand that it probably sounds right whereas just through reading you cant really get the flow and rhythm, which is a common problem...
Honestly then, I'd agree with Erik in that its really great as it is and I wouldn't change a thing.
Would love to hear the music for it, is that just instrumental or do you have the vocal melody as well?
Anyway, quality lyrics mate, good luck with this, always enjoy reading your songs!
Jake