[Saeed AlSuri]

OK this is my new English song.. just finished the main vocal .. the rest was finished yesterday ..

the first 4 lines woke me up from sleep and I wrote them down .. after 4 hours finished the verse bridge and chorus .. be 10 evening the two 3rd of the song was finished .. next morning .. the ending .. afternoon Recording commenced ..  

I was always wonder how John Lennon could write a song in a day .. now I know ..
hope you like it ..

https://soundcloud.com/saeed-alsuri/left-me-alone


the lyrics :


Left me alone .. 23-25/05/2013..

Is it late .. is it late for me ??
Is your heart full of hate for me ??
Is your love has grown so cold ??
Is it hard for your love to hold ??

bridge :

Is it late ??
Is it late ??
or is it hate ??

verse:

I never thought that you will leave me so soon ..
Your love for me like the Sun & Moon ..

Chorus :
You left me all alone ..
You left me all alone ..
All alone ..

Am I blind to what you did to me ..
I don't care how hard our life would be ..
I need to hold you cause I love you so much ..
It hurts my heart that you don't as much ..

bridge :

Is it late ??
Is it late ??
or is it hate ??

verse :

I loved you so much it .. hurts me to know ..
You really don't feel it .. you never show ..

Chorus :
You left me all alone ..
You left me all alone ..
All alone ..


Is it late .. is it fate for me ??
Is it late .. is it fate to be ??
Should I leave you and give up on you ??
Move on and look for someone new ??

bridge :

Is it late ??
Is it hate ??
or is it fate ??

Verse : Solo guitar ..

Chorus :
You left me all alone ..
You left me all alone ..
All alone ..
All alone ..

copyright SSA 2013 ..

Saeed AlSuri

[Neil C]

Saeed
Hi, its all consuming when it hits you like that....
Really like the first set of lines with those questions and look forward to hearing what you do with it.
My only ones I wasn't convinced about was the:
'I never thought that you will leave me so soon ..
Your love for me like the Sun & Moon ..'
To me it doesn't make sense and sounds like its just trying to rhyme.
Maybe change the 2nd line to something like
'Thought it was forever like the Sun and the Moon'
Just a thought

Neil
 

[Saeed AlSuri]

Hi Neil ..

Ya its really consuming .. I'm working on two songs in the same time today ..

About the Sun & Moon .. its my language which is effecting I think .. I don't mean time with it I mean source of life .. maybe soon got the meaning different .. sorry for that ..

thanks for the hints Neil .. loved your new post on soundcloud .. brilliant man .. utterly brilliant .. I would I ask you for the progression in the second part .. but maybe not secret of the triad ..

Cheers ..