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Neil C

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« Reply #15 on: July 03, 2018, 07:04:48 AM »
Davy,
Good straightforward lyrics and I like the direct vocals and guitar, straight to the point.
Thoughts, wasn't convinced about the middle 8, felt a bit like a placeholder?
Anyway it has great energy, says what it needs to and leaves you wanting more.
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neil
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Bill Saunders

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« Reply #16 on: July 07, 2018, 12:30:32 PM »
Hi Davy

What bloody marvelous song this is. I was hooked from the beginning by that descending guitar run. Such a short song, but it packs so much. And let me tell you, your voice on this one is extraordinarily good. Really gritty, in a good way.

Anything with heavy breathing in it gets my vote anyway.

One of my favourites of yours, I have to say.
Bill

Alan.S

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« Reply #17 on: July 17, 2018, 09:20:47 PM »
Very commercial and likeable sound on the guitaring.

Skub

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« Reply #18 on: July 20, 2018, 02:57:02 PM »
@redrhodie

Laughing at funerals can be good!   :D

@Neil C

Thanks Neil. Ya could be right about the M8. These days I just go with whatever pops into my head,I seldom overthink anything!  :D

@Bill Saunders

Wow! Do I owe you money Bill?  :D
Thanks so much man,I'm always insecure about my vocals,so I appreciate the encouragement.

@Alan.S

Thanks for listening.  :)

Cawproductions

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« Reply #19 on: July 20, 2018, 03:06:34 PM »
Hi Davy

Listened to this on Soundcloud before you dropped it on here,

really nice track, smashing the arrangement, Playing rocking as always,

I am a fan of your stuff so nothing to say only that,

Production is really good on this dude. well balanced, nice tones on the guitars etc.

Great work.

Skub

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« Reply #20 on: July 20, 2018, 04:10:32 PM »
@Cawproductions

Yo Andy,I've been using your vocal recording tips,do ya think I'm getting there with this one?

RobertMundane

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« Reply #21 on: July 23, 2018, 10:00:46 PM »
Hey Brother! Nice energy in the song! sounds like it could turn into a classic rock piece! you harmonies are AMAZING! love them. once I heard them I had to comment. keep it up!!!

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« Reply #22 on: July 24, 2018, 01:14:02 PM »
Some good parts in there ,  I read all the comments -for me not one of your best just didn't do it for me but then what do know


SlavaB

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« Reply #23 on: July 26, 2018, 07:45:46 PM »
Hi Skub,

Obviously as always from your songs …. Music expectations were met, Quality expectations were met too. Professional piece of work, and your follow, like and commenting stats says its all.

Well done!


Thank you.
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« Reply #24 on: July 28, 2018, 11:36:02 PM »
Another great song by you man!
Starting to get used to your sound, which is a good thing.
Your songs are different from each other ofcourse, but it's nice to hear that you use your voice the same way each time and use the 'same' set of instruments.
Really makes it nice to dive into your discography.
As for this song, it's great again. I like the electric guitar during the verses, makes it wayy more interesting to listen to.

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« Reply #25 on: July 30, 2018, 10:07:24 AM »
Hi,

Good stuff, especially I like the catchy chorus also the vocals are excellent.
I think the song could be longer?

Well done!

Refusedrevival

Tor Løvstad

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« Reply #26 on: July 31, 2018, 02:26:18 PM »
Really liked how you buildt up the melody progression in the intro. Your voice sounds good in this mix. I like how it sits well with the music. Also your phrasing is spot on! Keep up the good work!

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Skub

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« Reply #27 on: July 31, 2018, 10:42:12 PM »
@RobertMundane

Thanks for listening man.  8)

@Katieoasis

It's ok not to like stuff Katie and it's ok to say so. Thanks for listening.  :)

@SlavaB

Thanks a heap for listening SlavaB.  :)

@Almosthumanrobot

Glad you liked it and thanks for playing my other stuff. Much appreciated.  8)

@refusedrevival

I'm really into short compositions these days. I try to get it all done before 3 minutes!  :)

@Tor Løvstad

Thanks for the listen and comments.  :)

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« Reply #28 on: August 01, 2018, 07:51:08 AM »
sorry Skub. late to the party on this one. This is tge best song featuring heavg breathing that ive heard in a while! Love the lyrics and as others have mentioned the guitar riff is awesome. The song rollicks along. Another top rock song from you.

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« Reply #29 on: August 01, 2018, 11:06:21 AM »
Hi Davy,

I was familiar with this from your album but weirdly, it works better in isolation. I also couldn't believe how short it is - you pack a lot into a short space. I loved the melody on the "Close Your Eyes" line - straight to the hairs on the back of my neck. Great writing, awesome vocal and a real sense of authority and authenticity. Cracking stuff.

M