Have to say that compared with your other post (The Process), this seems kind of amateurish and childish.
Lines like:
In tights that don’t fit him
Tinkerbell’s an STI
And he hasn’t flown since Nam
A *very* clunky and don't quite fit the rhythm of the song and:
You're starry eyed and staring
But darling I'm not caring
Is a fairly obvious/uninventive couplet.
You then totally pivot following this:
Non-Stop Top Pop Chop Shop
Birds of a Feather Pluck Each Other
Starry Eyed And Staring
Have we changed to a separate set of lyrics from here on?! Same again following 'Cleopatra'.
Sorry for the harsh criticism but compared to the imagery and imagination in your other effort I was surprised this came from the same pen!
The only real constructive criticism I can think of here is - drop stuff like this and develop the other side of yourself that you have shown us