Chris - the first thing that grabbed me here was your voice. It is simply beautiful. I feel almost attracted to you in a way I can't say on this forum. The vocals really deliver the message of the song.
I love the combination of acoustic guitar and piano - they really compliment each other and are superbly played. I also disagree with the comments about the hook - I spotted it myself and although subtle, a song is a song and who cares if you have to do the standard verse-chorus structure.
I wasn't keen on the drums and beat too much, I thought they were just there to fill things out without too much inventiveness about them, but they did a job. All in all though, I was hooked from start to finish - it's superb.