You sound as consummate as always
You should be making money from this
Online networks could make things happen
Otherwise, what a waste of talent
However, for a ditty like this,
I can't find much beneath the surface
I generally prefer your lyrics
With the more complex rhyme schemes
Although you're taking up space,
you're not really wasting paper
I just find this a bit of a waste
for a writer of your caliber
But feel free to post
Whatever you feel like
I didn't come here to boast
I didn't come here to criticize
-> someone tell me more about this ->
Hi Paul
As usual a great write, loved the fun in it. BTW very impressed with your proficiency in handling that rude dude on the other site. Bravo!! 
