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hardtwistmusic

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« Reply #15 on: August 31, 2013, 10:12:56 PM »
There is a depth to this lyric that usually precludes "sweetness." 

Your lyric is deep, sweet, and has something important to say. 

I can hardly wait to hear it played and sung. 
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« Reply #16 on: September 01, 2013, 11:09:33 PM »
really well done, I enjoyed reading this a lot I found the lyrics very emotive. My favorite line has to be Saw the ghosts of the past make an honest man’s wage
Al

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« Reply #17 on: September 02, 2013, 10:55:13 AM »
Thanks so much guys, I'm really pleased you like the lyrics.
I have about 7 or 8 new songs to record once the studio is set up so when I get round to it this will be sure to get posted on the finished songs page :)
Thanks again
Mark