Hi
So I wrote this song a while back and recently recorded it. Some useful comment from Adam and vicki got me into thinking about rewriting slightly (I get a bit precious sometimes
) and so I have tried to give it some new life.
The original lyrics structure and track can be found here for anyone interested
http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=13885.0Any thought on this greatly appreciated. The song is about how my now wife (then girlfriend) came into my life at a time I most needed someone. Soon after getting together I moved away (pre planned) and the latter half is a reassurance to her that I committed.
Thanks all
Darren
Where Two Forces MeetI know my head's a mess, it's been that way
since the day I started searching for answers to life's questions
And solutions to its problems with such intensity
That I lost myself in me
I know my life's a mess
but hey, what am I going to do about it now
The damage has already been doneRain falls from clouds
The sun shines up this land
and where these two forces meet
a wonderful thing is seen
A rainbow brightens up the skies
I know this world's a mess but since that day
that you said you liked me this world has been a better place to be
And I can see a future here for me
And I can feel something real building up inside
I don’t know if I can live with you out there on your own
And I don’t know if you can live without your someone to hold
But, for every day and every night that we spend apart
Mair there’s one thing resounding here in my heart
Rain falls from clouds
The sun shines up this land
and where these two forces meet
a wonderful thing is seen
A rainbow brightens up the skies
If you want me I will give you everything I’ve got
Said if you want this let’s give it everything we’ve got
Every hope, every dream, every smile through every fear
And every tear cried a tear cried for us.
Rain falls from the clouds
the sun shines up this land
And where these two forces meet
a wonderful thing is seen
A rainbow brightens up the skies
A rainbow brightens up the skies
A rainbow brightens up the skies
A rainbow brightens up the skies
A rainbow brightens up the skies
Your warmth seeps into my eyes
Your touch tingles down my spine
Your smile imprints on my mind
As your heart it captures mine
A rainbow brightens up the skies
A rainbow brightens up the skies
A rainbow brightens up the skies
A rainbow brightens up the skies