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August Rain
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Wicked Deeds
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Re: August Rain
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Reply #15 on:
August 20, 2021, 05:12:29 PM »
@LostBoy
, don't worry about falling out of favour with the songwriting Gods. They won't abandon you for long. You're too big a talent to lose your way but also don't dwell on the lack of new songs. It can hinder your comeback. "Stars hold your fire. Save your luck for the wishful thinkers", that's a great line! I've always loved your voice. It's something for all of us here to admire. Lot's of ingredients here to make a great song. I do think there is a bigger and better mix waiting to be found to elevate this lovely tune and uplifting chorus. Great work Leo.
Best wishes
Paul
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digger72
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Re: August Rain
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Reply #16 on:
August 22, 2021, 01:35:32 PM »
Hi Leo,
This bursts out of the traps and never lets go.
Very upbeat and breezy.
Love how solid and prominent the bass is without muddying things up.
Great production work throughout.
Top notch vocals give it that pro sheen.
Digger
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rightly
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Re: August Rain
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Reply #17 on:
August 23, 2021, 10:15:55 AM »
hi
listened to this
another fave of mine from your catalogue
well done
excellent production
very commercial sounding, and in a good way
very endearing voice. Are you making money with these productions yet?
All the best, Rightly
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It's either this or that, then again it might be the other.
I can promise you a future of slow decline.
Don't eat the yellow snow
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